In my class we have been doing narrative writing about natural disasters. We write a draft in our book and then we acted it out so it made sense. It has been really fun listening to other peoples writing. Here's a trailer I wrote for my writing. "It was a normal day at Lake Brunner School". Crack Bang! We ran to the field outside and a hole was forming in the ground. "RUN"! We ran to the fence and jumped on it as we were about to get burned. "We were so close to being safe". My favourite sentence in my story is, "We thought we were safe but then something terrible happened"!
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